tilly and yasmin feedback

I think the strengths of this video are the still frame of the different stereo types with pictures and a short description. I also like the way that it is written on paper to show that these stereo types especially exist in schools. The fault i would change is some of the cuts look strange when it goes from the white stills to the video. I think this is because the still images only take up half the screen so the cross dissolve only takes up half the screen and the other half just fades in from black. a weakness is that the stereotypes do not stay on screen long enough for you to read. Also because they've had to lower the quality so that the video can be streamed online it's hard to read the writing. also there isn't any titles on the film.